Sales pitch:- Financing pitch for a safety product to keep you safe from an Earthquake.
Hello ladies and gentlemen thanks for taking out your precious time for gathering here. I'm a salesman who brings products on various things and today I came up with one of the most valuable product i.e which we can use in the time of earthquake or any other natural disaster.
As we all know that earthquake shows all of the sudden & destroys everything which comes in its path. But we can save our lives from it, if we use some life saving products. Who doesn't need this product when it comes for saving our and others lives? Everyone needs it, Yes!
So our new product is "safety beds", so "do you all know what is safety bed?"
Let me tell you everyone that safety bed can prevent you from earthquake, it's quality and protection is build strong and secure enough to protect you.
All you need to do is press the one button and BOOOOM you inside the bed and whatever the damage will occur it will not harm you.
Everyone knows one should find strong cover to protect themselves from the earthquake, like furniture, tables, etc.
Now, you don't need to find any strong furniture when earthquake will come. Just buy this safety bed you can sleep on that pleasantly and also it will save you from an earthquake.
Plus once you are inside the bed, it'll be equipped with all basic survival kit and first aid kit. Like, oxygen cylinders, water bottles, food, etc.
I hope you all will like it, and want to purchase this. So, without thinking more, go to your near furniture shop and buy it.
Nicely shared Rizwan. Just try to focus on small grammer mistakes like is/are. And I don't think a salesman needs to say I am a salesman to people. 😂😂
ReplyDeleteSure I'll focus on those mistakes. Thank you for your valuable feedback. 🌚🌚
DeleteYou can sound a little more exciting. When you write you advertisement next time keep homeshop18 in mind. You must have seen how many qualities they share about their product.
ReplyDelete😅Sure, I'll definitely look into it. Thank you for your valuable feedback sir❤️🤝🏻it meant a lot.
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is build-will build You are doing sales pitch and not telling the price.
Ahaa I will not forget this detail to added. Will work on it. Thank you for your kind feedback.😺😺
DeleteYou have written good stuff but you are writing a sells pitch so should start with questioning and a little bit conversation should have there.
ReplyDeleteThat was really a good idea. Next time I'll keep this in mind. Thank you for your feedback.🤝🏻🤝🏻
DeleteI like your sales pitch if I was a buyer , I definately take this product.
ReplyDeleteYou can still order it from Amazon or any other online platform. And the price is affordable.🌚🌚
DeleteIt's a lovely pitch, but please use more vocabulary and short sentences.
ReplyDeleteYeah, working on this thing beside in a limited time my brain was not recalling the exact vocabulary. Thank you for your valuable comment.🤝🏻😺
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